I’m Back! – Updates

Hey there! I’m back! Didja miss me? Just kidding.

I’m very refreshed from my very long hiatus, and so excited to be back! Before I get back into my normal posting, I have some updates for all of you! Continue reading “I’m Back! – Updates”


Goodbye… For Now: I’m Going On Hiatus

Yes, you read that right. I’m going on hiatus.

What is exactly is a hiatus?

This is what the dictionary says: “a pause or gap in a sequence, series, or process.”

So, basically, I’m going on a blogging break.


Well, a lot of things have been happening in my life lately. I’m under a very high amount of stress, and I’m miserable. I’ve been thinking a lot, and I have come to the decision that I need to drop something.

I love blogging, but I love writing and acting more. I feel bad saying it, but it’s true.

But I don’t want to quit blogging. So I’m just taking a break.

How long will my break be? I have no idea. It could be a couple of weeks… but it could be a few months. I might come back in February, or maybe September. We’ll see.

But for now, I’m signing off.

Thank you, lovely readers.


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Three Things You Should Never Do To Your Characters


Hello, everyone! It’s Natasha again.

And before you ask, yes, Chloë does know I’m here. She’s kinda freaking out because of an upcoming audition. I don’t see what she’s so excited about, the only thing kids can be in it are Munchkins and Monkeys. I’d try out for Dorothy. I’m almost an adult, after all. Anyways, the only thing Chlo doesn’t know about is the subject of this post. *smirks*

And I’m pretty sure that the title of this post is self explanatory.

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Thing Number One

Don’t kill everyone dear to your character!


How would YOU feel if we, the characters from your book, attacked everyone you love? Well? How would you feel? EXACTLY. That’s how we feel! So.

And also.

How many times has your sister or best friend dropped down dead from a gunshot or poisoning or something like that? How many times?

Yeah, pretty sure that that has never, ever, happened. So, if you include deaths in your book, they aren’t very realistic, because, in real life, most people don’t just drop dead.


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Thing Number Two

Don’t send your characters on dangerous missions!

This one is just cruel. Why send kids on dangerous missions? Why not adults? Okay, maybe you do send adults, but whatever.

How many times have you, as a kid, or even a teen, gone on a dangerous mission? Have you ever had to survive in the wild because of an inaccurate compass or map? I pity you if you have, but if you haven’t… it proves my point.

Kids on dangerous missions are inaccurate. Very much so.

Really, just think about it.


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Thing Number Three (or should this be the Cat in the Hat??)

Don’t blow up your character’s home! Or set it on fire! Or flood it!

So, maybe one of these things has happened to you (the fire or flood), and you know how unpleasant it can be. So why torture your characters by inflicting it on them? Hm?

And do you know how awful explosions are? Trust me. I’ve been in one… not fun at all.

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Was I able to convince you not to do any of these things to your characters? Huh?

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Dear Mr. Tolkien…


Dear Mr. Tolkien,

I want to say that you changed my life.

The Lord of the Rings books were the first book that I ever fangirled over. They gave me something to be excited about. I’ve always been a shy person. But your books helped me come out of my shell.

I’d see someone wearing something related to the Lord of the Rings or the Hobbit. At the Medieval fair, I was so excited when I saw someone dressed as Aragorn. (In case you were wondering, I was dressed as Tauriel. I know she’s not one of your original characters… but still.) And then, I lost my shyness and asked the person if they liked your books. If they said yes… well, we could talk for hours.

Before I read your books, I liked writing, sure, but I wasn’t serious about it. I had written some novels, but they were absolutely horrendous. They can’t even be called novels. I shudder to think of them.

But when I read your books, something clicked in me. I don’t know what, but something did.

Suddenly, I knew what I wanted to do with my life. I wanted to become a writer. Not just a writer of short stories. I wanted to write great books, classics, like your books are.

No idea if that will ever happen, but it gives me hope on the hard days. My grandma died two years ago, and I lost my passion for every single activity I had loved when she was alive. Fencing, sports…

The Lord of the Rings reignited something in me, something I had missed so much while I was mourning.

And the Lord of the Rings movies, and the Hobbit movies, they gave me my love of acting. Or maybe they just rekindled it. Maybe it was there all along…

So I want to thank you for writing your amazing books, because without them, who knows where I would be right now?

Oh, and happy birthday.


Chloë Mali

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Did Mr. Tolkien change your life in any way? Is there some other author that changed your life?

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Goodbye, 2017



Well, here we are, at the end of another year. Can you believe how time flies? I really can’t. Time is such a precious thing, isn’t it?

I think I’m getting sentimental now.

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2017 Highlights

  • Joining YDubs (by the way, they are opening for enrollment again soon!)
  • Starting this blog
  • Finishing my first full novel
  • Roleplaying with Madi and Josie
  • Meeting Madi!
  • The Medieval Fair 2017
  • Annie Jr.

So many more awesome things happened in 2017, but these are the ones that stick out in my mind the most.

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2018 Goals

  • Read 150 books
  • Finish the three main projects I’m working on
  • Look into starting an email list
  • Improve my blogging skills
  • Drink. more. water. (I tell myself this EVERY SINGLE YEAR. And does it ever happen? Nope.)
  • Relaunch the (blank) (blank)
  • Launch the (blank) (blank) (blank) shop.

I have more goals… but those I’ll keep to myself. 😉

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December Highlights:

  • Handing out Blessing Bags to the homeless on Christmas Day

Um. So, that’s really it for December, because it took up most of my month….

Fangirl Moments:

  • Re-watched the Lord of the Rings and Hobbit movies (Ahhhh I love them so much <3)

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December Goals Recap:

  •  Make 250 Blessing Bags/Stockings for the homeless people in our town. Sadly, no. We made it to about 120.
  • Read 10 Free Reads for school. Ehhhh… maybe? *counts* Hans Brinker…. The Open Gate… that Hungarian book and its sequel… Philomena…. um…. I don’t think I quite made it. *sigh*
  • Finish half of the Starless outline. And… for Arendale’s sake… don’t come up with anymore evil ideas… for her, at least, poor girl. Yep! Actually, the whole outline is done, I start writing tomorrow!
  • Start fleshing out the idea for the Starless sequel. Another one that I did!

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January Goals:

  • Write 10k of Starless.
  • Write 10k of Forgotten.
  • Make a blog button and finish some pages that I’m working on. (speaking of that, did you see my new pages?)
  • Read 10 free reads.
  • Get Alpha readers…?

Happy, happy New Year, everyone!

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What are your goals for 2018? How did 2017 go for you?

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Upcoming Projects – Introducing Forgotten


Huzzah! BeFunky finally started working for me again!

And yes, this was supposed to be posted on Wednesday, not Saturday, especially since I’m planning a post to go up tomorrow. But WordPress did something funky and I had no idea how to write a post. Oopsies.

Anyhow, in this post, I’ll be telling you all about my three projects I have planned for 2018. You already know about Starless, and possibly, you might know about Autumn Rose. *has forgotten if I’ve shared about it before on this blog*

But…. you know nothing about Forgotten, and I thought I’d enlighten you. and myself because let’s just forget the fact i know barely nothing about it cough cough.

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Forgotten is…. a Sleeping Beauty retelling!

I think I got the idea for it because of school. My mom is from the Czech Republic, and I am fluent in Czech so that I can speak with my relatives. My mom has us listen to one song in Czech for school each month, and this month’s song was Šipková Ruženka, which means Sleeping Beauty. I’m not going to share the song, because you probably won’t understand it.

But it really got me thinking. What if Sleeping Beauty woke up totally alone… and forgotten by everyone? (Pretty sure you’ve guessed why this book is called Forgotten XD)

So… I was supposed to be outlining all my novels from here on out. Ermmm…. didn’t happen. I know next to nothing about this project, except for the following:

Singing peppermints!

Talking rosebushes!

Fairy apprentices!

Erm. Basically, when Briar Rose, the princess, wakes up from a 100 year sleep, there is no one in the castle. No princes anywhere.

And so, Briar Rose, a tomboy, goes out into the woods, trying to figure out what in the world happened to her beloved parents. And she runs into a shepherd boy, whom I am currently calling Rowan.

From there, they track down Briar’s fairy godmother, and maybe…. if I feel nice…. find her parents alive. If I feel evil…….. *muhahaha*

And here… I couldn’t resist staring the novel already. Snippet for you:

The king and queen of Serembrond wanted nothing more than a child. For years, they had hoped and prayed, but it was all to no avail.

That is, until the beautiful queen Adelaide encountered a talking rose bush.

Queen Adelaide had seen unusual things before; Serembrond and the kingdoms surrounding it were chock full of unusual things.

But a talking rose bush? That was new. And really quite alarming.


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Autumn Rose

Autumn Rose is a project I’ve been working on for a while, but I put it aside for some time. During 2018, I hope to rewrite it and get it ready for publication. I think I can do it in 12 months…. maybe?

Teralina is my main character in Autumn Rose. She is a 17 year old Elven princess, and she is captured by a dragon on her quest to get help from her elder sister when the castle where she lives is besieged.

I have a synopsis for it someplace…. but I can’t find it…. I should keep track of my writings…

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And I won’t bore you with more about Starless… my goals for it this year is a perfectly polished manuscript, also ready for publication.

Okay, well… one more thing about Starless: A collage for my character Arendale.

Aren collage

In case you can’t see the text, it says:

“I may be what they call a Survivor…. but what is life when everything has been ripped from you? What do I have to live for now? – Arendale”

Sorry, couldn’t resist sharing… I’m proud of it. XD

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Are you working on any projects in 2018? Tell me about them, please? *puppy dog eyes*

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Outlining Your Novel Workbook by K.M Weiland- Review

Hey, guys!

So, today, I have a review for you! As you probably can tell by the title of this post, I’m reviewing the Outlining Your Novel Workbook by K.M Weiland.

Recently, I joined her exclusive group, Wordplayers, and I requested the Outlining your Novel workbook to read (for free!) and review.

So let’s get started! (Oh, and don’t worry- I did read Outlining Your Novel first (turns out they did have it at the library, after all.))


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Usually, I despise workbooks. A lot of the time, I can’t understand what is wanted of me. So I was very pleased to see that the Outlining Your Novel workbook was very easy for me to understand.

I’m really more of a visual learner, and I loved all of the little charts and things, such
as the “How Much Time Do Stories Need?” thingy (what do I call it?) on page 56.

I also loved how Ms. Weiland took real stories and movies for her examples, such as the Hunger Games. (Fangirl speaking XD)

The whole workbook was amazing, but my absolute favorite parts were the character interviews and the whole of chapter 17.

As I’ve been working through my outline, I’ve been feeling “caged in”. I need room to dream, and I can’t have everything planned out. I will admit I was very close to giving up on my outline, when I scrolled all the way down and found chapter 17: “Unconventional Outlines.”

That chapter was EXACTLY what I needed. I adore the map section the most, but all of it was so amazing. (let’s forget the fact that I can’t draw a map to save my life.) And the calendar was absolutely genius.

After reading the workbook and working through it, I know exactly the direction my story needs to go.

All in all, I give the Outlining your Novel workbook five stars, even though outlining doesn’t exactly seem to be my thing.

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And that’s my review! I know I’m really awful at writing reviews… but I did my best!


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Do you outline?

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